Super Stories!

Date: 9th Feb 2022 @ 5:04pm

Today we looked at using all our writing skills to write an exciting story.  The children did amazingly well!  We looked at the start of a video from the Literacy Shed website. You can see the video at this link:

https://www.literacyshed.com/uploads/1/2/5/7/12572836/marshmallows_993_153.mp4

We only wrote for 40 minutes, but the children wrote some amazing stories in that time.  We also watched a video posted by author Tom Palmer which helped us with our editing.  We learnt to write fast, then we add things, take things away and then replace.  

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUScPnDwzPU

The video was very useful although we did notice that Tom's handwriting was a bit scruffy!

The children loved sharing their ideas about what would happen to the monster and, more importantly - the marshmallows!

Well done Class 2!