Improve the sentence

Date: 4th Oct 2015 @ 9:31pm

Look at the sentence below, can you improve it?

max ran

Think about capital letters, full stops (other punctuation too), adding a prepositional clause, subordination, adverbs, verbs, fronted adverbials (comma), rule of three action and/or an independent clause (semi-colon).

I look forward to reading your work, have fun!